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Lionel <n...@alt.net>

Kibo informs me that Mark Herring <Noma...@surfcity.net> stated that:

>On Thu, 18 Dec 2003 15:38:49 -0500, "Vindrew" <some...@microsoft.com>
>wrote:

>>Latest picture added to my gallery for your kind review.
>>http://www.pbase.com/image/24248372.jpg

Dunno about 'kind', but I'll give it a shot. Technically, the shot looks
fine to me, but IMO, it has lots of artistic problems:
(1) IMO, the red background clashes horribly with most of the fruit.
(2) The sideboard or table is very distracting. Try putting it on
something bigger, & perhaps use a nice tablecloth.
(3) The lack of variety in the fruit makes for a fairly boring set of
colours. How about adding some bananas & purple grapes, to give it some
some colour?
(4) The tray badly needs polishing. Bright silver & the resulting
reflections would probably add interest to the picture as well.

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