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Vindrew

More options Dec 23 2003, 11:43 am

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From: "Vindrew" <some...@microsoft.com>

Date: Mon, 22 Dec 2003 19:43:44 -0500

Local: Tues, Dec 23 2003 11:43 am

Subject: Re: Latest Gallery Addition

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Thanks all for your feedback. I need these constructive, if not blunt,
commentary. I appreciate your time!

Vincent

"Lionel" <n...@alt.net> wrote in message

news:8ul4uvcunitha4i3aurcscv27rlrg0pf7p@4ax.com...

> Kibo informs me that Mark Herring <Noma...@surfcity.net> stated that:

> >On Thu, 18 Dec 2003 15:38:49 -0500, "Vindrew" <some...@microsoft.com>
> >wrote:

> >>Latest picture added to my gallery for your kind review.
> >>http://www.pbase.com/image/24248372.jpg

> Dunno about 'kind', but I'll give it a shot. Technically, the shot looks
> fine to me, but IMO, it has lots of artistic problems:
> (1) IMO, the red background clashes horribly with most of the fruit.
> (2) The sideboard or table is very distracting. Try putting it on
> something bigger, & perhaps use a nice tablecloth.
> (3) The lack of variety in the fruit makes for a fairly boring set of
> colours. How about adding some bananas & purple grapes, to give it some
> some colour?
> (4) The tray badly needs polishing. Bright silver & the resulting
> reflections would probably add interest to the picture as well.

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